I't was pyjama day at school, everything was fine, until...
We were doing socials then the crack of thunder exploded from my behind. Silence arose from the class, as my orange pyjamas started turning green thoughts swam through my head of what I was going to do. I quickly rushed out of the class room (in my bare feet) went home and never came back.
I't isn't a word. I think you mean it. Your story is very creative, but I think you could add more descriptive language in it. Classroom is one word.
ReplyDeleteI't is not a proper word, like Cocopuff said, I'm pretty sure you meant it. I like the jyst of your story and I think it's very original. You just need to go through and catch all of your grammar and punctuation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteYour story is very creative good descriptive language.
ReplyDeleteIts kinda confusing and why did your pyjamas turn green
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