Wednesday, 13 January 2016

100WC week2 by my name is JEFF

As I joined the queue beside Billy ,my best friend. "Hey did you finish the home work yesterday and can I copy I mean borrow it?"I asked. "yes and no"he replied. "AWWWW come on dude!" I said .RING RING RING the bell rang. NOOOOOOOO everyone yelled dramatically. School whent by I failed as normal. During lunch this kid Reymond bullied me as usual punched me in the gut kicked me in back but this time I took a stand and punched him smack dab in the face. After he never bothered me again.
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4 comments:

  1. Unknown13 January 2016 at 20:35

    Flows smoothly and I can get what is going on. Also the sentence ... as I joined the queue ... can't be at the beginning of a sentence.

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  2. Pinky14 January 2016 at 08:45

    I like how it flows smoothly and the idea. I recommend you using more descriptive words.

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  3. Unknown14 January 2016 at 21:04

    Good story I like the part when u punched smack dab

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  4. Unknown14 January 2016 at 21:04

    Good story I like the part when u punched smack dab

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