THE PRANK CALL
Ring Ring.. Hello?...why?...my house is on fire?...stop playing pranks it annoying! Ugh why do my
friends wake me up during the weekends? I'd like to sleep in for once, I thought to myself while getting my Shreddies. No one is at the table but it's hot in here. Wait... is that BACON?! No, I'm just on fire... I'M JUST ON FIRE!! AHH . Running through the house I dive out the closest window like a beautiful swan in underwear and land in a bush. Ring Ring.. Hello?...why?...my house is on fire!! Okay it's just a prank.
Your story is really funny I like the details that you say when your flying through the air
ReplyDeleteYour monologue is not in the proper lines. Another thing is nothing really flows in the story. I still though like how you describe the fire.
ReplyDeleteIt's very exiting story! Though at the end, you said you were on fire, and then you weren't was that the prank, or were you imagining it ? In all its a very funny and bizarre story!
ReplyDeleteGreat job paying close attention to punctuation. I am a bit confused about if there really was a fire or not as it is not clear. I am also not sure about your comparison to a beautiful swan in underwear as this is something that isn't possible so it might not be a good comparison.
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